Scene One
(First the audience is introduced to a calmful surrounding with a stop for waiting passengers for Streetcar uses. Sounds of seagulls and calmfull waves are present as it drifts through the neighbourhoods and streets.The character, 'Blanche' is looking around the area as she gets off a streetcar however she is lost.)
(Blanche looks around the stop and spots two rich white ladies who wear fur scarves and expensive jewellery, talking amongst each other, she takes her chance and goes to ask where her destination is.)
Blanche:(Nervously) Excuse me? er... do you know which streetcar I need to get, to get to 'Elysian fields'?
Woman 1: No ( Looking Blanche and down)
Woman 2: Err, wait I think I do. You have to get the Desire Line. You can wait here for it.(Politely)
(The Character Blanche is nervously travelling on the streetcar to Elysian fields. The sound of cars and traffic are a mere distraction to her as she thinks of what her sister will say to her. She fidgets looking around unsure and disappointed that her sister may live around a 'dirty' part of New Orleans. Her face holds a number of experssions helping us determine exactly how shes feeling, while we get to familiar ourselves with the area in which Blanche arrives in.)
A good attempt. Perhaps you could have included some more elements to develop the sound and reveal the set.
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